tweak PIA text

diff --git a/content/news/2017-04-12-pia.md b/content/news/2017-04-12-pia.md
index a18e126a3e8be10f97bf27a45712959d450c177b..30a777b39a673acc5869895b068c6d8813586a4e 100644 (file)
--- a/content/news/2017-04-12-pia.md
+++ b/content/news/2017-04-12-pia.md
@@ -34,9 +34,10 @@ personally and I, along with several other senior freenode volunteers, found
 that we no longer had quite the same amount of time and energy to dedicate to
 the project.
 
-Following discussion and deliberation we have decided to become part of the PIA
-family. While freenode will continue to operate as a not-for-profit entity
-under the same management, this move will provide us with opportunities and
+Following discussion and deliberation we have decided to formally (and
+legally) ally ourselves with PIA. Freenode will continue to operate as a
+not-for-profit entity under the same management, with the same principles,
+but PIA's involvement going forwards will provide us with opportunities and
 resources that we could previously only dream of. PIA will provide an operating
 budget, mentorship and support that will allow freenode to implement some of
 the projects and ideas that have previously been on the backburner due to