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[irc/evilnet/x3.git] / src / nickserv.help

diff --git a/src/nickserv.help b/src/nickserv.help
index 0b17c8d260f130f613def5b27bfa1b827437590a..b4f92b423bb2ab07a437e80110f280a7e1304cef 100644 (file)
--- a/src/nickserv.help
+++ b/src/nickserv.help
@@ -2,18 +2,20 @@
         "/services/nickserv/disable_nicks" {
         "/services/nickserv/email_enabled" (
                 "=------------ $b$N Help$b -----------=",
-                " $b$N$b is an authentication service, ",
-                " intended to serve as a central       ",
-                " authentication point for all other   ",
-                " network services. $b$C$b, $b$O$b, and   ",
-                " $b$G$b all depend on ",
-                " $b$N$b to verify that users are valid.",
+                " $b$N$b is an authentication service,",
+                " providing login identification for",
+                " the network. $N is how you 'log in'",
+                " to get access in channels registered",
+                " with $C, and its how ircops are known",
+                " to $O and $G.",
                 " $b$b",
                " $b$N$b help categories:",
                "  $bACCOUNT$b      Account management.",
-                "  $bEMAIL$b        Email maintenance commands.",
-               "  $bINFORMATION$b  Other functions.",
-                "  $bOPER$b         $N commands for IRC Operators.",
+                "  $bEMAIL$b        Email based commands",
+                "                 such as recovering forgotten",
+                "                 passwords.",
+               "  $bINFORMATION$b  Informational functions.",
+                "  $bOPER$b         Commands for IRC Operators.",
                 "$b$b",
                 " $b$N is $uNOT$u a NickServ$b!        ",
                 "  see $b/msg $N HELP NOT NICKSERV$b   ",
@@ -22,17 +24,17 @@
         );
         "!/services/nickserv/email_enabled" (
                 "=------------ $b$N Help$b -----------=",
-                " $b$N$b is an authentication service, ",
-                " intended to serve as a central       ",
-                " authentication point for all other   ",
-                " network services. $b$C$b, $b$O$b, and   ",
-                " $b$G$b all depend on ",
-                " $b$N$b to verify that users are valid.",
+                " $b$N$b is an authentication service,",
+                " providing login identification for",
+                " the network. $N is how you 'log in'",
+                " to get access in channels registered",
+                " with $C, and its how ircops are known",
+                " to $O and $G.",
                 " $b$b",
                " $b$N$b help categories:",
                "  $bACCOUNT$b      Account management.",
-               "  $bINFORMATION$b  Other functions.",
-                "  $bOPER$b         $N commands for IRC Operators.",
+               "  $bINFORMATION$b  Informational functions.",
+                "  $bOPER$b         Commands for IRC Operators.",
                 "$b$b",
                 " $b$N is $uNOT$u a NickServ$b!        ",
                 "  see $b/msg $N HELP NOT NICKSERV$b   ",
@@ -122,7 +124,7 @@
 "NOT NICKSERV" {
                 "/services/nickserv/disable_nicks" (
                 "=------------ $bNOT NICKSERV$b ------------=",
-                " $N is $unot$u a NickServ. On AfterNET, ",
+                " $N is $unot$u a NickServ. On this network, ",
                 " nicknames are not owned. $N allows ",
                 " you to register a single account to ",
                 " log in to all channels, seperate from ",
@@ -382,7 +384,7 @@
           "$bPASSWORD$b: Sets user's password.",
           "$bFLAGS$b: Changes account flags (SphHdscfn) for user (see $uaccount flags$u).",
           "$bLEVEL$b: Sets $O access level.",
-          "$bEPITHET$b: The description $C shows for the user's access.",
+          "$bEPITHET$b: The description shown for the user's access in /whois.",
           "$bTITLE$b: The title the user will get (in there hostname) when +x.",
           "$bFAKEHOST$b: The fake hostname the user will get when +x.",
           "..or anything $bset$b can change.",